Wildest Temptations

Honestly, whats a person's age got to do with anything?

I'm continuing, I already have the fourth chapter almost finished. Chapter four is interesting. haha. Kind of leads away from what I started with, but not too quickly. It is ...

Chapter Three What Kasey Saw I stood there, just staring through the crack. They were on the bed, making out. I felt a tickle in my throat. I coughed, only ...

Third chapter soon to be posted.

I don't want to be too picky, but this is supposed to be a review, but I hope I don't bore you with mistakes, and things that could be improved. ...

I'm really glad you liked it. I am glad that my writing has the power to keep you reading. I will write more, but for now, I kind of need ...

It was great, although I am going to point out three minor errors. 1. ...light lavender color, who paints there house lavender.. There means to go somewhere, I.E. You stand ...

I posted a new chapter to the story. Here is the link:

Chapter Two Meet Kasey I could feel my heart beating rapidly as I walked through the door of my house, with my parent’s eyes glaring at my back. I could ...

That error was fixed. Right at the moment, I am hoping to get more of this finished, although I am flooded with homework. High School. Gotta love it.

I really liked this story, perhaps one of my favorites. Anyway, I would like to point out one thing. “Why do I listen to you again?” She whispered. It didn't ...

Okay, I did edit it, and put the rest in first person, changed it from Prologue to Chapter One, and gave it a name :"Emily". The chapter name is "Emily" ...

Okay, great. I'll start from these reviews. Lots of fixing. Haha, post more later.

Okay, so I take it that this isn't the greatest story. But whatever, I can always right more. eh?? Just tell me what I can do to improve, and remember ...

This is one of my first pieces, so rate away, and correct my errors. The story was going to be called Ice Tear, no idea why though. I only had ...